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Review:intothether says:
First things first: What I like the most about this story is the complete normalcy. I like that you didn't portray James and Sirius as hot hunks with an entire platoon of fan girls behind them like most fan fiction writers are wont to do.

Second things second: Sally. Hell yeah I like her. Also the fact that Ellen Page on the banner looks completely gorgeous haha, but I'll just skip over that. I was surprised when she didn't make seeker, but the twist just made it better.

Third thing third: I can bet all my money this is going to be Sally/Sirius.

Fourth thing last: I can tell but just this one chapter that this story is one I want to see to the end. Added to favorites! :)

Author's Response: I did the whole hot marauder thing in a fic I wrote aaages ago when i was a new ff writer and I am never going back- so yeah, I tried to just write it as I would any story! I'm glad you liked it!
Thank you so much for your review!!

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