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Review:ValWitch21 says:
I stampeded over from the forums, only to be greeted with this quote four paragraphs into the story.

He frowned a bit to himself - he had never seen the young woman with Black, he was fairly certain. Who had she been? Surely Black, of all people, hadn't gotten a girlfriend? Severus smirked at the thought; the poor girl. Then again, if she had agreed to date him, she must be as big of an arrogant idiot as he was.

You are the evillest person on the planet, I swear. Severus is so clueless and I know he hates Sirius but this is Beth! YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO LOVE BETH, YOU NINCOMPOOP. NOT HATE HER. OR BE MEAN TO HER.

Nooo, the poor idiot still thinks he's doing all of this for Lily. :( Ah, but I sense some questionings. Hmm. GO AU, RACHEL, I BEG OF YOU. Do not let this fit with the rest of the series, please.

WHAT. WHAT. WHAT? Severus is remembering snippets and you tear them away from him? From us? How can you do that? Please tell me it kills you too, so that I don't feel like I'm the only one suffering. PLEASE.

Blargh. So many uncontrollable Sneth feels. WHY?! I have no idea how to express how I feel, and there are already too many capitals in this review. Sunday will never be here fast enough. NEVER. I WILL DIE SLOWLY AND YOU WILL BE RESPONSIBLE.

This was a brilliant, brilliant chapter, again, though in a terribly emotionally painful way. And I'm an inconsistent, flailing reviewer again -- do you see what your writing does to me? Do you?

UGH. &hearts

Author's Response: Ack, I'm sorry! ♥ I just mentioned this in another review response -- but that's definitely a barb meant to sort of wound the heart. I add a lot of those into my stories, and I'm not sure why. It is rather cruel, but I hope you'll forgive me for it!

It's sort of weird, writing Snape to think that he's doing all these things for Lily. I've had to get adjusted to a whole new mindset for this story, as it were. :P I can't tell you how everything ends up, of course! You'll have to read the rest of the book for that! The snippets are also supremely important to the rest of the story; keep your eye on them...

Your reviews always make me smile so much. Seriously! :D Val, you are just awesome. True story. Thank you so much for always taking the time to leave me your opinions on this story -- it's people like you who honestly keep me going!

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