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Review:ValWitch21 says:
Me again!

I'm disliking your Rose, which is a good thing, because I know why she irritates me, and it's not just 'Here is the character my OC dislikes, you must dislike her as well'. You give my irritation a valid excuse.

That, and I've grown increasingly tired of perfect Rose, so this is a real breath of fresh air.

That's it. You've done the undoable. YOU WROTE A MAKEUP SCENE WITHOUT MAKING THE READER DIE OF BOREDOM. This just confirms your talent as a writer, taking a cliche and twisting it to something new and interesting.

I can completely identify to Darcy's relationship with her grandma. I don't know if it's something you've inspired from your personal experience, but you're spot on (as usual) in your characterisations.

Haha, of course, the meeting for tea will be purely professional. OF COURSE, AL. I BELIEVE THAT. Huh, not. I'm so excited to read about that!

Another great chapter, eagerly waiting for the next one! I think I'll go read something else from your page in the meantime.

Author's Response: Hi Val!

Oh, good. I drew some inspiration for Rose from the girls I see on the bus in the mornings, chattering away on their phones and gossiping with their friends about their high-class lifestyles. She's not all bad, I promise, but it's great that you feel irritated by her even apart from Darcy's opinion.

People dying of boredom is a major concern for me in this story, because I have several chapters that are like, "Let's try on clothes and talk about relationships." Please, please, let me know if you get bored out of your skull!

I drew a little from personal experience, but mostly I wanted to pull in some canon there and give Darcy a little bit of depth. Her grandma isn't a major theme in the story, but I seem to have an issue with pure fluff, so I had to add in a little bit of angst, haha :)

You're awesome, as always. Thanks for this sweet review! Next chapter will be up Sunday.


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