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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi! I haven’t actually read any of your work before, so I was excited to read some!

I really liked your characterisation of Albus, he seemed so much like Harry, with his constant worrying! At least he had a nice time on the boat ride there, with him chatting away with Hagrid, and Rose!

Ooh I’ve never seen Al in Ravenclaw, usually it’s Gryffindor or Slytherin, so this was a nice change! And on the positive side of it all, he at least had Molly in Ravenclaw, so he wasn’t completely by himself. Then Rose came along as well, and I thought that was again a nice twist.

I really liked Rose’s characterisation as well, she really reminded me of a young Hermione, who was so eager to find out everything, and the way she discussed all the possibilities of which house she may end up in. It was so nice to Hermione 2.0.

The only CC I can really give, is that the spacing between the words seemed bigger than usual and that got a little off putting at times, so perhaps if you reduced the size of it, it would make it easier to read.

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

Glad you liked Albus. Yeah, he's like Harry in some ways, but not so much in others.

I wanted to put him somewhere other than the obvious two houses and I had reason not to want to put him in Hufflepuff (not because of the story, but because I have another character with some similar personality traits who's a Hufflepuff and I was afraid if I put him in the same house, I'd end up basically writing the same character) so that only left Ravenclaw.

And yeah, Rose is sort of a less insecure version of Hermione. She's not so obsessed with getting absolutely perfect grades all the time and she's a little less obsessed with the rules, but other than that, they are very similar.

And thanks for the CC. You're right; I do put an extra space between words. Sorry if it made it difficult to read.

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