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Review:aquabluez17 says:
Hey dear,

Mya here for your review =)

Okay so I did like this beginning though I felt that the character development was rushed. I could see Mikaela on paper but I couldn't see her in flesh if that makes sense. (She kinda seems bratty)

Same goes for everyone else =)

Another thing you would want to avoid is having chunks of writing. Break down paragraphs to help the reader while they are reading. Big paragraphs make is dooming for one to read =)

Besides that I think this was a great start!! Would love to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Hii,
haha she is bratty she's Draco's daughter what do you expect? :P
Yes I get that. I need to add more details.
I have done that in the next chapters I guess.
I can't wait for you to review the next ones. Thankyou so much :)
-Em


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