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Review:teh tarik says:
Oh. Oh my goodness. My heart is broke into two. *sobs* THIS PARAGRAPH. Is evil.

There will never be a fine summer's morning and, in the drudgery of the school routine, he will eventually run out of things to write to her about, and when her driving instructor takes her through Leith for a practice, she will miss his presence by the train station by mere minutes, and, besides, she will never pass the driving test she has only half a care about and she will never own a car, and his father will find a new job in Manchester and move the Malfoys away from Leith forever, and a new family will live in the house where, once, he managed to vanish himself into the garden on the winter solstice without feeling a thing.

*sobs* *sobs* You tied things up so well. And then you just broke everything up.

Brilliant. These are the stories that just really leave such impact on me. The ones with connection, the ones with fleeting connection. The ones that never reconnect again once the connection is broken. What am I saying. Am just...this is such a beautiful story. LOVE how you incorporated quantum physics into it; it can't have been the easiest, because the quantum stuff I'm reading (because I have nothing better to do :P ) is just not english. But oh gosh you've done it so well.

Your characters aksjdhalksjdh so human, so real, and you write with so much empathy. Scorpius Vanishing things is such a lovely but unsettling detail. Oh, I'm just stuck with the image of them leading parallel lives - and the loneliest most isolated lives - never to meet again. They're kindred spirits, those two. Maybe...they can reunite by time travel or something XD

OK, anyway, brilliant story really. You're an amazing writer. Favourited this and I'll be checking out your other stuff!


Author's Response: I'M SORRY I JUST LIKE BEING HEARTLESS. I took lessons from Steven Moffat's Doctor Who episodes...

I love my bittersweet endings! You know, things look good. And then they're not. Because I'm cruel, but I also think it's because I'm a touch too cynical to ever write a truly happy ending :P

Ahh, thank you so much for saying so! I did get rather attached to my characters in the process of writing this, so I'm very flattered that you liked them.

Maybe they can! The last sentence is a little ambiguous, feel free to interpret it however you want...they will vanish...vanish...into the time rift...

Thank you so, so much for reading and reviewing ♥ ♥ ♥

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