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Review:MargaretLane says:
Love your example of what they're transfiguring. It's kind of similar to matchsticks into pins, so it seems like something they'd be likely to do shortly afterwards. I always wondered what other things they'd do in first year transfiguration.

Dire does remind me of Snape, especially with the way they're now suspecting him of being in league with Zajecfer.

*laughs* Louis Weasley is in 4th year in my story too, but it sounds like that's where the similarities between the characters end.

I also like the fact that James seems to do reasonably well at school in this, since he's often the lazy, troublemaker type.

I also like the fact Albus is kind of relieved not to have to play. It's realistic and human.

Aw, poor James, but funny to see him on the receiving end of the teasing rather than being the teaser.

Oh, wow, I just assumed Gryffindor would win, so that's a surprise.

Oh, one mistake. You've written "loose" instead of "lose" near the end of the chapter.

Author's Response: I decided to have them transfigure simple things that looked similar in their first year. Unfortunately, we don't see much in the Harry Potter series what they transfigured, but I do imagine that they transfigured simple things.

Professor Dire is similar to Snape, in a way, except for one major thing- He treats Slytherins and Gryffindors equally. He just hates Albus because Al never knows the right answer.

Yeah, I noted during your Christmas chapter that your Weasley cousins were all way younger than mine. And they are all remarkably different in personality.

James is a troublemaker and teaser- usually he just teases Albus and Lily. But even though James is the teaser, he's always on the receiver end when Fred and Louis are around!

Even though Albus loves Quidditch, he's terrified of making a fool of himself in front of the school. I didn't make him reserve for nothing though! (hint, hint)

I'm really sorry Gryffindor lost the match, but I'm really happy for Hufflepuff. Since I am a proud Hufflepuff, I couldn't just let them lose! Don't worry, Gryffindor will win other things, I'm not that terrible towards Gryffindor.

Thanks for pointing out the mistake; I will fix that. I try to catch all of them before I submit the chapter, but of course, I'm human! I can't catch every single one. So it's great that you look it over for the ones I missed.

Thank you so much for reviewing! :)


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