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Review:patronus_charm says:
AH! Thank you for sending me a link to a Marauders story! That is my favourite era to read in, even if it is about Peter Pettigrew ;)

I thought this was such an interesting perspective to write from, Iím surprised Iíve never seen it done before. I think Peter betraying his friends, is one of the hardest things to understand in the series, as you canít comprehend why anyone would do that to their friends, so it was nice to see how you provide some backstory to that.

I really liked the part about Eleanor and how when she was taken, and then saw Peter she thought she would be saved, but sadly that wasnít the case. I think that just showed you, in situations like the one they were in, you can never, ever anticipate what will happen, and where peopleís true loyalties lie. It was just so haunting the way Peter didnít seem to show that much remorse or regret, when talking about Eleanor and the other victims. But I think if youíre going to take part in things like that, you have to close down your emotions, otherwise you would get scared and back out, as you realise what youíve really done.

In answer to your author note, of course this story did the moment justice. It was excellent, and it was really realistic and believable, and you could almost hear Peter narrating the story, as it just seemed to be what he would think.

The only CC I can give is to write more to this story, as it was so powerful, and amazing, I would love to learn more from Peterís perspective as it was really well done.

An excellent one-shot, so thank you so much for sending me the link :D

-Kiana!

Author's Response: Hi Kiana!

Thank you so much for your lovely review! I've always grappled with this moment and trying to understand some of the psychology behind Peter. It's such a hard moment to deal with that trying to capture it felt like trying to catch a ghost in the wind. I've always been a bit unhappy with JKR's characterization of Peter. Or at least, the parts that she's chosen to tell us about.

I'm pleased you connected to this and thought it did the moment justice. That's such a huge compliment so thank you so much.


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