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Review:zipzin says:
Just wanted to start off by saying that this is an amazing chapter. You have an amazing style of writing and it is very gripping to read.

Your beginning with Bellatrix is amazing! I think you really captured her character well, showing her thought process so she's still a human, but a pretty messed up one at that. The whole way she thinks about pain and the foreshadowing of the train ride, well I can't wait for the next chapter.

I have my doubts about Sirius and Lily's relationship. Between everything that they've been through it seems fine, but I just, I'm not sure about it. Like they either need to be closer because of it, or farther apart because of something else. I can't quite put my finger on it.

Let's go Belle! You can do this! Just go to France tell them off and then you and Sirius can go skipping into the sunset!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hi darling!!

Aww I'm so happy you like my writing style! That really means a lot to me, because I do try and push myself into improving as much as possible.

I think Sirius and Lily definitely have an odd sort of friendship. I think Lily has a really soft spot for him because of the things he's gone through, and then after what happened with her parents, they really got a lot closer. I'm absolutely not ever going to put them in romantic territory or anything! But I do want to give them a real friendship, and not just a, friends because she's James's gf, sort of one.

Eeeek I'm so excited to see what you think of the next chapter!! To France we go!

Thank you so much for your awesome reviews, m'dear ♥

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