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Review:EJK says:
Bravo! Another fabulous chapter!

I enjoyed the atmosphere you created in the Burrow. The private moment between George and Ron was thoroughly moving! Ginny waking up to Harry was also a touching and loving moment- Hermione and Ron, too! I loved the choices of presents! Poor little Teddy- didn't even get a mention in the films!!! Harry being there for him is going to be wonderful to witness as their relationship blossoms. It's refreshing to see Ron's 'soppy' side with Hermione.

Percy is an interesting addition to your chapters due to the fact that he's not explored much throughout the HP series.

This chapter exudes the feeling of a loving and cozy family Christmas- much needed after the war!!!


Judging by your comment though, this is acting as the calm before the storm! I look forward, as ever, to reading what you have in store for us next!!


A couple of spelling and grammatical errors. (not sure if you used a spell checking programme on this as there were a few) Your writing style has improved dramatically and is continuing to do so with every chapter! Out of complete curiosity, what is your first language? You astound me with your written English considering it's not your first language! I'm British and I know several of my friends would be hard pressed to produce writing anywhere near the quality of yours!

Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! :)

I'm so glad that you liked it. I felt like they deserved a little bit of happiness and fluff, especially around Christmas (even if the part with Ron and George was a bit sad as well).

Percy is actually one of my favorite characters. I imagine that he changes a whole lot after the war - especially after watching his brother die. I think it will change his perspective a whole lot.

Yes, things are about to get a bit more intense in the upcoming chapters...

I will try to check this chapter again for mistakes. I'm glad that you think that I have improved, because I am really trying to! I'm Swedish ;) You have no idea how happy it makes me to hear that you think my English is good. I'm working hard on it, and I'm probably going to move to an English-speaking country after the summer in order to improve even more.

As ever, I am very grateful for your review. I really, really appreciate how you always take time to let me know what you think about every chapter. It helps me in my development and I can't thank you enough!


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