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Review:Gred says:
Wow. This is the most poetic fan-fiction I have ever read. (And quite possibly the best.) It was like reading a chunk of emotion. (I know, I'm sorry, cheesy.) I don't often read fan-fictions and think that the writer should be a published author, but in your case, I do. I think this would have been a brilliant piece even without the Remus/Sirius relationship, but I really like it and you do it really well.

Hang on, I'm going to have to read it again.

Okay, I'm back. This is going to be really hard because I love it all, but I especially love:

i) 'One last Marauder, one last joker left in the game'

ii) 'You don't like smiles anymore.'

iii) 'It's unhealthy, and jackoff get lost in the smile.'

iv) 'James is honourable, too honourable.'

v) 'Harry looks at you with Lily's eyes'

vi) ' - ahem - You have my blessing'

vii) 'You are the sole survivors.'

viii) 'It is the most magnificent thing you have ever seen.'

ix) 'her mouth forming the smallest "O".'

x) 'The love lies thick in your mouth.'

xi) 'You are bathing in green.'

xii) 'fin.'

xiii) The entire last bit - The Battle of Hogwarts.

xiv) The whole thing.

It's actually really inspiring, it makes me want to put much more feeling into my stories. I'm now going to go and read all of your other stories.

P.S. (I hope this was a good review, it's my first ever. (!))

Author's Response: This was perfect.

I LOVE when people write which parts they liked. So yeah. I'm a fan of your review. That is such a huge compliment to tell me to become a published author, I don't even - Yeah. Thank you? Thank you, thank you. This really means a lot. So, yeah. Perfect review?


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