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Review:Courtney Dark says:
This is such an incredible and unique idea for a story, and I am enjoying it so much so far! Not to sound like a boring high school English teacher, but you show such a clear understanding for this period of time that when I'm reading it I can really picture in my minds eye the setting the characters are in and can feel all of their emotions. It is also such a clever idea for a story-I've always wondered what witches and wizards were doing during the Muggle wars!

I love how you continue to define each of your characters and how they are all so different from each other. I think Jean is my persona favourite-he seems as though he can be quite bloodthirsty, cruel and cold-hearted which is always interesting to see in a character. I also think Camille is quite a strong character-definitely similar to Jean, but perhaps not quite as cold. And I love the dynamics between the group when they all get together, and the mystery that surrounds their conversations.

I really enjoyed reading the scene with Camille and Xavier, especially the flashback which you incorporated really well. It was a nice way of giving us some back story into a couple of the characters lives. I also liked how you gave us more insight into both of these characters personalities during their scene.

I have no CC's for this chapter, which I think was even better than the first-keep up the great work!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi again!

You don't sound like a boring high school English teacher, don't worry -- your compliments mean a lot to me.

How interesting that Jean is your favourite character so far! It's not something that many people have told me so far, so I wonder how your opinion about him will evolve...

We'll be getting more background information about the other characters in coming chapters, which I hope you'll enjoy as much as the flashback in this chapter!

Thank you so much for your review :)


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