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Review:fauxthefox says:
Hi! Faux here for the swap. So, before I start with general review-stuff, I'd like to say that I'm not the person who goes around "aww" in left and right, but there were a few moments here when I couldn't help but "awww."

The overall plot of the story is, obviously, adorable, but what I really like are the small details. For example, Katie's "doe-eyes." Doe-eyes=doe=Lily=parallel between past and future. I love Katie's character overall. She's very real, with a protective outer layer of playfulness that shields what's underneath.

I do have a problem with one part of the story - Katie's line: "Good! I don't think I've been felt up this much since my cousin visited last summer."
Right. Not sure if I'm interpreting this wrong, but it sounds like an allusion to familial sexual abuse. As someone who's had experience with that kind of thing, I have to say that offhand jokes about it are really, really, unfunny. I'm sorry if I'm being weird and misinterpreting, though.

Very cute! Thanks for the swap.
Faux.

Author's Response: Hello there, thanks for the awesome review! Wow, I'm glad that I got you to "aww" ;) such an honour.

I'm happy somebody picked up on the doe-eye allusion :) Yes, she kind of hides herself underneath her responsibility of "best-friendship". Thanks!

Oh snap, I forgot about that part. I think I put it in as an attempt for her to keep the mood in the closet "light," but I can see where a massive interpretation within the context can arise. It's totally fine, I'll probably go in and change that part (as well as the million grammatical errors)

Thanks again for reviewing, very helpful comments,
soapman333

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