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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi! Iím here from the review swap, and I was so glad to find it was a Dramione, as I love this pairing :D

The AU Granger family took a while to get used to, but once I did, I rather like it. Iíve never come across a Dramione like this before, and I thought it was a really interesting that you made them work for the Malfoys for two reasons. First it was strange to think that Lucius would employ muggles, but it was also nice to see that he didnít completely abhor them. And secondly it would be interesting to see how this would affect Draco and Hermioneís relationship.

I also liked how you change POV, as it meant we could learn more about how the characters actually were. When itís told just from one POV, it means we donít know as much about them, and their views can be biased, but I liked this idea. It would have been nicer to perhaps have more in the Narcissa and Lucius section, as it lacked in detail. I thought that your characterisation of them was very good though, and it seemed to be like them.

As for CCís, though it was only the first chapter, it would have been nice to have more details about each character, as they still feel a little unknown, and Iím not entirely sure how they connect to one another. You also had a formatting issue, as the space between each paragraph differed, and it looked a little odd, thatís really easy to sort though, so you donít have much to worry about.

I thought this was a really interesting start, and quite different to other Dramione stories, so I do think that you should carry it on.

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: Thanks!! I will deffo start writing another chapter thanks to your positive feedback.
I'll explain in more detail the characters during the next chapter so thanks for pointing that out:)
BS


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