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Review:Hanazkabananah says:
I love this story!
Don't get me wrong.I really like the mushy stories where James changes from the egotistical,prank pulling Potter to the mature man for Lily but when I read those stories and then nothing bad really happens to them(beyond house rivalries and an occasional mudblood)until after Hogwarts,I'm like,"Yeah,okay."
I love that a dramatic and horrible event starts the story and it really has nothing to do with their magical life anyway.
I love that James had to learn to be a comforting friend to Lily before he could be anything else to her.
I love that Lily worked out how she felt on her own time and didn't just run into James arms (or Sirius' for that matter) because he was the first man around that held any ounce of comfort for her.
I love that everybody is so human and they aren't perfect.Lily was irrationally angry at James after her parents death.Belle the beauty has made some mistakes.Alice is sweet but can be snarky and rude when provoked.Sirius is just plain old messed up(not that that's at all surprising).
I love how creepy and spot on Bellatrix is written into the story.
I love the Potters,like can they be my relatives?Pleeeasse?
I just love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!Belle's trip to France and Lily's trip to the wedding are both going to be huge!
Keep it up.:)

Author's Response: Hi there, Hana! Ahh I'm so happy you're enjoying this story!

I feel the same way as you. I love the every things happy until after graduation stories, but it just doesn't feel realistic. There had to be a lot of leading up for these young kids to commit themselves to a war, so I hope through this I do justice showing those things.

That's exactly what I wanted to show! That James had to learn to be a friend to Lily before he could be anything else, and that she really came to her feelings on her own and not because it was convenient. And no, no Sirius. I could never do that to my precious little James and Lily :P

'Belle the beautiful,' oh god, I LOVE THAT! Haha! And yes, Sirius really is just messed up. haha.

The Potters are so awesome, if you get them for your relatives, I get them too :P!

Thank you so much for stopping by to review, and the next chapter will be up first thing from Saturday!! I'm really excited to hear your thoughts on it!! ♥

Jami

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