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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey there! Here for review tag.

This was an interesting one-shot indeed. I liked your plot and the idea of Raoul being a player of sorts, and Lucy - Percy's daughter - falling for him, and such. Your narrative flowed well too, and the concept and emotions were expressed well. I enjoyed the way you wrote your scenes.

There were a couple of grammatical errors and typos though, like you wrote "were" instead of "where" and switched from first person to third person.

But apart from that, this was okay. I liked it. Good job =)

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey AD

thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it =)

I'll make my way through all of the errors! I didn't re read the story haah :P

Glad you liked it!


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