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Review:ValWitch21 says:
Hi Amanda!

This chapter was absolutely lovely through and through. I'm starting to sense some seriously blossoming feelings between Cedric and Cho -- and now I'm really hoping you don't kill Cedric off at the end. PLEASE, OKAY?

I love Miriam, even though we barely saw her here, and the way Cho respects and fears her at the same time. She reminds me of Helga in Diamonds into Coal, actually.

What struck me most about this chapter is the mood you create. We know it's the war, the sense of danger and suffering is present in your description, yet you still manage to lighten the atmosphere and not be like 'ANGST PAIN ANGST' in a horribly obvious way. Everything is done with featherlight touches and, again, I'm amazed with how well you write.

Brilliant chapter again!

Author's Response: Hey Val :)

Yeah, there are some butterflies happening. I've written the end of the story, but I won't spoil it for you...

You know, Miriam does have some Helga-esque elements in her. I think I just really love that type of woman, and it's the kind of woman I want to be remembered as, and so I can't resist using it in my writing.

I kind of wanted the back drop of the story to be this war-torn, pain-filled environment, but with the main plot being a touch lighter, as you said. People live in situations like this even now, and you just have to press on and make the best of every day, and pretend that there is still some sense of normalcy.

Thanks for your lovely review :)

-Amanda

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