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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:

I'm here with your requested review and I'm sorry that it took a minute! :) So, we're back with Tori and her awful/interesting/peculiar/awesome train of thoughts. I shouldn't really have such a complicated feeling for a character but she's actually pretty interesting.
With her thing with James, its sort of creepy and sort of sad. I mean, its obvious that she was a little uncomfortable but putting up a front to make up for it was something that I just tsked at. And uhm, she can stay away from Fred, he's mine. >:D
Anyway, James seems sort of indifferent to what happened between them and I'd like to know why, perhaps he's so used to doing it with girls that he doesn't really care anymore? Was he playing hard to get? Judging from what happened to them later, I doubt it now. Hehehehe.
But anyway, Tori seems to think the whole world revolves around her and the way she acted with Smith was just amazing. I mean, that takes some guts but honestly, she just makes my head spin! And I'm really curious about her thing with Aine, they don't seem to like one another very much and I actually like that tension. I wonder what's going to happen later? :D
So, Albus in this chapter was a nice little surprise and he's so cute! Like, seriously, he's adorable! But so shy! I didn't like that Tori was using him but there was a tad of genuine kindess towards him that I did like seeing. I think that will play out well sometime down the line. ;)
The buildup you have going on is just great, I like the dark, glittery atmosphere coupled with teen angst and Tori is just a great character to write this story in. Her POV is just so unique, she's a person I love and hate! :D
Really enjoying this and feel free to re-request!
No CC's either aside from just a few spelling things!
Much love,

Author's Response: Gah, I'm sorry it took me so long to reply-I really need to get back to fanfictioning. This site is so addicting, and I can't get enough!

I'm actually glad your feelings for Tori are complicated because she's a complicated character! She's definitely not likeable but she's not OMG IT'S LORD VOLDEMORT, WE HAVE TO KILL HIM either. And I have no idea where that little outburst came from! I apologise.

Tori's relationships are definitely...unusual, but you're right about Tori acting genuine towards Albus.

Thanks so much for the review!


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