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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for your requested review.

Another fun chapter indeed =) Before I go on about the story, let me say I loved your disclaimer at the end and it made me chuckle. Let's make a list indeed xP

I am enjoying Peony quite a lot and it is sad that her journey comes to an end in the next chapter. She really makes me laugh so much, that I don't know what I'd do after this story is over - no humour in my life!

This was as-ever quite well-written. I enjoyed your characters and setting. Astoria was absolutely revolting and yet cute and crazy and I liked how you wrote her.

And OMG, where do you come up with your amazing lines! "Unrequited love only leads to binge eating, and a proper Slytherin girl should never be caught with her mouth full." I laughed so hard at that, ghosh.

I loved how the plot has "deepened" - it continues to grow in an interesting manner which is great. I think I have said so in my all reviews so far, but really I am so pleased (and astonished) at your ability to maintain a coherent and interesting plot along with your humour, that I always feel the need to appreciate it in all my reviews. I am guilty of thinking that the cohesiveness of the plot may perhaps start taking the back-seat as the story progresses, but you have proved me wrong and I am so happy. I cant wait to see how it all ties together in the end =)

And of course, before I wrap up this review, I must give an honourable mention to Pansy as she definitely enhances the comedy in the scenario. Oh and of course, Snape deserves an honourable mention too! You do write him wonderfully, and I loved his 'role' in this chapter ;)

Once again, no criticism to give you! Good going! Feel free to re-request (as I am sure you will).

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to get to this review response. I've had a lot of things on my plate these last few weeks.

Anyway, I'm glad you're enjoying Peony and that she makes you laugh. Poor Astoria got caught in Peony's drama-backlash, but she's a big girl. She can handle it. :)

Unrequited love can make a person crazy. Haha! I don't know where that line came from, honestly. It just popped out and I immediately knew it was a keeper.

I guess this whole story was an exercise in plotting. I had these outrageous characters and this horrid Mary Sue concept, but I still wanted it to be a good story. I'm so happy that you feel the plot has held together so far.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my crazy story!

pix


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