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Review:megthechef43 says:
800 words of heaven,

It is unipue idea to have witch that can see a certain type of ghosts that not all magical beings can see. It will definantly make this interesting as the story progress's.

I like Ellie's realistic but snarky attitude she has going on. The chemistry between Ellie and Albus is great even if they don't exactly see it yet and I would love to see how that develops through the story.

I like that you mentioned what happened to her mother and told a short story behind it and didn't feel the need to dwell on it. It was sad but ended on a good note that Ellie never saw her mother after her death.

Rose is fun and not what I normally see in next-gen. Normally she is a bit more like her mother but it is a bit refreshing to see Rose characterized differently. She added a bit of fun to the chapter by dragging Ellie around.

I hope you continue to write.

Megthechef43 aka Meg

Author's Response: Hello!

You think it is a unique idea? I mean, there are lots of only-I-can-see-them ghost stories out there... I hope it works!

Yes! Ellie and Albus were surprisingly easy to write - I often have trouble getting the chemistry to work, but I'm so pleased to hear that you think it worked!

I might include more about her mother's death later on. It was obviously a big deal, and had a major impact on her life.

I really wanted Rose to be normal. Ellie can be quite high strung at times, and I didn't want two high strung characters like that - they'd worry each other to bits!

Thank you so much for your lovely review!

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