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Review:AlexFan says:
I thought it was only six people that were allowed to visit person at the same time because I remember Madam Pomfrey yelling that there shouldn't be more than six people visiting Harry when she thought that Hagrid was more than one person. Either that or I'm remembering things wrong.

The narration between Sirius and Thalia is really similiar, in fact, it's practically the same. If it weren't for the fact that they mention different friends and different names and such, I wouldn't be able to tell the narration apart.

I loved the banter between Lily and her friends though! It was so lighthearted and I had fun reading the conversation that they had going on about James liking Lily. I especially found it funny when Lily's dad thought that she had a stalker.

Anyway, good chapter, I really enjoyed reading it!

Author's Response: Oops, I should have checked that! I knew that there was a rule, but I kind of had to twist it to fit the situation.

I'll try and change the narration so it's not so similar.

I love wiriting that banter between the friends, it's so light hearted and fun! I thought it would be funny to add in that bit about Lily's dad thinking James was a stalker, as he does come off as one at times!

I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it, and thanks for the review!

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