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Review:Siriusly89 says:
Grrr. . . . .my internet was down so I have been piped to the post once again! Curses!

Anyway, I am loving Edie's girl-power! You go Edie! And her little revenge on Rose was pure genius, I do understand why she couldn't take Blakeslee about the article though, as she probably woudn't have believed her!

And Edies brothers, they are like the brothers you'd love for your best friend to have, because they would be hilarious, but hate for them to be your brothers, because they would more than likely embarrass the hell out of you (just see Edie as an example :p)

I loved Edie's scene with Oliver at the end! Because lets be honest, that establishment was the last place Edie wanted to be with her YOUNGER BROTHERS. Period. And Oliver should seriously have thought of this BEFORE getting drunk with them, and buying them, well unsuitable things!

I must admit, I was slightly, well, excited when Edie slapped Oliver round the face because HE DESERVED IT!

The interview is going to be quite awkward though. . .


And I'm suffering from Seamus withdrawal. . . . . .so if he could appear? Pretty please *fluttering eyelashes*

I will get my title the next time! I will!

Author's Response: Awww, that's okay! It was the internet's fault--not yours! ;D

I couldn't help but throw in a little (or a lot?) of feminism in here. I think I got too concerned with readers being like "ugh, the strip club scene, how trite," so I was like NO GUISE SRSLY IM DIFFERENT I AM I AM. Don't know what exactly was achieved here.

I loved writing her brothers! Leo gave me some trouble, as he was coming across a bit too Seamus-y. But I think I finally figured out what makes them different, and it's that Seamus has this sense of duty and responsibility whilst also being a partier. And Leo is just a partier. ;D

I'm going to talk about it later in the story, but Oliver is the type of person to be put in the spotlight and not want to disappoint. Edie's brothers recognized him, and must have known him for being a notorious partier, so he was all I AM MAN MUST BE COOL MUST IMPRESS ALL OF THE DUDES. So of course he just got crazy and didn't think about how it would affect Edie.

And yes, yes the interview will be quite awkward.

Gah, I know, I either have all Oliver or all Dean/Seamus in my chapters. He makes a brief appearance in the next chapter. Promise ;3

Thanks so much!!! Your reviews always make my day!

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