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Review:megthechef43 says:
MrsJaydeMalfoy,

What a powerful first chapter. I felt horrible for Charlie and I just wanted to give him a hug and tell him that it isn't his fault. At first you had me intrigued and wondering how it was Charlie's fault but then I realized that he was just blaming himself... Or was he?? I do not know...

I like the bond between Bill and Charlie and I wish charlie would have spilled the beans about what was bothering him but then what would happen with the next chapters. you drawn the readers in nicely with this first chapter. It is great...

Megthechef43 aka Meg

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this for me! I'm really glad you think this was a powerful first chapter!!

Haha, a lot of people have been confused when they've read the first chapter, because they really don't believe it was Charlie's fault (because it wasn't). I don't want to give too much of the story away, but you'll find out in the next couple of chapters why Charlie feels this way.

I agree; it would have been wonderful if Charlie could have revealed his feelings to Bill right then, but then that wouldn't have made for a very long story, would it?!? :P

Thank you so much, dear, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

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