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Review:megthechef43 says:
Lumos Nox,

I'm here with your review finally. I'm ashamed with myself for the length of time you had to wait for it. By here it is finally.

I love that you used the current Emma Watson to model the Hermione in your story. I think Emma looks absolutely beautiful with a pixie cut. She is one of the few people in the world that can pull it off.

I truly wish to slap the crap out of Ron for the way has been acting in this chapter. Though I believe that is what you were shooting for. :) I can't believe he would cheat on Hermione but he was always the selfish one in the books and cheating on Hermione is very very selfish.

I really like the little intro into Astoria and Draco's relationship. the way you discribed Astoria's outfit is how I always think of purebloods. Dress to Impress. I hope to see more on Draco's feelings about his relationship. Is he happy with her, is he just staying with her because it is easier than breaking up. He said she would only make it worse but I wish there was a little more elaboration on this statement.

Great Job on this first chapter!!!

Megthechef43 aka Meg

Author's Response: Hello Meg! Haha it's okay about the wait, I don't really mind.

Yes! Emma Watson looked absolutely gorgeous with her pixie cut, she definitely rocked it!

Please don't hate Ronald! He's my favourite Weasley, and though he's kind of the bad guy in the story, I still love him. And eventually we do learn more about Astoria and Draco's relationship.

Thanks for revewing Meg! xo


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