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Review:solana says:
Thought I'd add my review here. I'm really liking this one, and I had some extra time, so ...

Yes, I agree with the others that you really have Rose down pat. As a character she's multi-dimensional and like everyone is flawed. I like how you're allowing us to get into her thoughts both when she interacts with others and when she's thinking.

I do feel strongly that she got together with Xander very much on the rebound. So we'll just have to see how you choose to handle it. I feel she's still very much in love with Scorpius and maybe he's really the one for her. We'll have to see in which direction you choose to take them.

I also agreed about some of the sentence structure. Nothing serious, just some commas where sentences just needed to be broken up some.

And we'll know more about Al and Dom as the story unfolds. Of course, as a diehard Scorose fan, I'm absolutely dreading this wedding. Are you really, really going to have them get marrried?

Author's Response: Hi thanks for stopping by and leaving a review!

I'm glad that you're liking Rose, as I find it hard to give characters flaws as I feel mean, but I'm glad that you feel that she has some:)

Yes her and Xander did get together on the rebound, but she does genuinely have feelings for him. Her and Scorpius are very complex, and I do think there is a part of her that still loves him, but I can't say more, as it would ruin the story ;)

I'll look over the sentences and add some commas.

Al and Dom do feature more in the latter part of the story, so don't worry about that:D The wedding is exciting, I hope I won't disappoint you, but I can't really say anymore about it;)

-Kiana


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