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Review:Lovely Jane says:
You should go into more specific detail on the dark mistress because I seem to have a hard time picturing her or was that how you wanted it to be? You can also try to give the readers clues as to who the dark mistress is. What helps me when I have writers block is to just breath and relax try to forget about it for an hour or two and then get back to it but this time picture yourself as that character. I really look forward to the next chapter and I hoped I helped! Good luck! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I find it kinda hard to discribe the Dark Mistress because I can see her so clearly in my head and Teri can just have me discribe her verbally. Thank you for pointing that out and yes it is a little harder because Dark Mistress is a mystery- I don't even know who it is yet ;)

P.S. I was very happy when you gave me my first real critism.


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