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Review:patronus_charm says:
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You really have a love for the Malfoys especially Lucius and Narcissa! I think it's great that even though you've written so many stories about them, you still find new ways of writing about them, and showing a new perspective about their lives.

I think this was a really accurate portrayal of how their relationship may have been after the war. I think the fact that Lucius went slightest mad in Azkaban was great, and that despite treating Narcissa like that, she still came when he was dying.

I thought the flashback was well done, and the idea that it was Dean who delivered the news was good. It showed you how much their positions had changed, and where the power now lay.

I like the idea of Draco being in Paris, but it might have been nice to have more backstory to that. Also I wasn't really sure why prison had a capital p.

Other than that I thought it was a great oneshot, and it showed a really believable portrayal of their relationship.

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

Haha yes I love writing the Malfoys! I especially love Narcissa so I try to find new aspects to her life to write upon =)

I am glad you found this to be an accurate portrayal of their post-war relationship. I think Lucius would have definitely gone slightly insane in Azkaban and would have treated Narcissa badly - but her love wouldnt waver.

I am pleased to know that you liked the flashback and the inclusion of Dean - it was something that I came up with on a whim so its good that its appreciated!

Well, I always thought Draco to be the kind of person who'd want to go away from everything and so he went to Paris, but if I ever do an edit, maybe I'll include a letter/flashback about it.

I am happy you found this believable. Thank you for your lovely review!


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