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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hello darling! I'm here, as you might've guessed, with your requested review.

Let's get to it. First, I like your choice of main character. Lucy and Molly, being the children of Percy and the OC Audrey (whom we've never met) give a lot of room for various stories, since we know nothing about them.

I liked how you dropped the little hints about the wizarding world and the way in which the other characters carried on with their lives (Percy still at the Ministry, Rose a Healer, Draco Malfoy, the Minister of Magic !? That makes him Harry and Ron's boss. I bet Ron loved that)! It was a very nice touch.

Raoul seems like the bad boy our Mom's warned us about. He spells nothing but trouble and in some places it seemed to me like he was holding his position in the Department above her head. And of course, Lucy being an intelligent woman, fell in love the way intelligent women do. Like a complete fool.

I especially liked the ending, where she was sure that the announcement was more to prove that he was in a superior position, than to actually announce he loved her. That could make for a very interesting chaptered story. Just saying.

The writting flowed smoothly, I couldn't spot any spelling mistakes and the grammar was impeccable. Good job! Stop by for a request again when you update a story or publish something new!

Ral

Author's Response: Hey Ral!

Thanks so much for doing this =)
Im really glad you liked Raoul! I got the name from Song Of The Lioness, my fav books ahah :P

Ooo! I bet Ron through a fit but for some reason I just couldn't see Draco wallowing in pity or whatever you know? He has been grown to live off of power. Even if he doesn't believe in all of the blood mumbo jumbo, he still needs power. So what better way to get it? :P

I was really confused with which character to use actually. I wanted to write one of the Next Gen Weasleys but I couldn't pick who. In the end I was like Lucy sounds great w Raoul! yaya for couple names :P

oo! hahah great minds think alike! i was actually thinking of maybe writing more about the couple based on if people liked their interaction in this OS.

thank you =) will do!

Mya


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