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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling! Here for chapter 3, yay!


I love that you had Hermione not comfortable in her outfit that shed’ been given to wear, so she’d look like someone who a Malfoy would actually date. As well as her clear distaste for stealing someone else’s appearance. I think that it absolutely seemed in character for her not to love it, but again this is an assignment she’d been given and she isn’t going to back down just because there are some details she doesn’t love.

Ooh I like her allies name! I’m a fan of Hailey. It’s very feminine and fits in well with the kind of persona their trying to give off for her. And I love that you have ‘Hailey’s’ background so well planned out!

OH! OH! Malfoy doesn’t even know it’s Hermione :O! I hadn’t realized that! What a fun twist, you sneaky author.


And now I’m so excited to find out what’s going on at this evenings meeting!

I really like that you didn’t take away Draco’s arrogance. I am all for believing that Draco straightened up after the war, when he finally had the freedom to make his own decisions without his life and his family live’s hanging over his head, but I don’t like when he isn’t still ‘Draco.’ So I really love that you aren’t changing his personality in to an unrealistic sweet sort of attitude. He’s working on the right side of the law now, but he was still born and raised a Malfoy and has it built into his brain that he’s better than anyone else. Even if that eventually fades, it would never go away completely, and I think you’re doing an awesome job showing that.

This was another exciting chapter, m’dear!

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