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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling! Here for chapter 3, yay!


I love that you had Hermione not comfortable in her outfit that shed’ been given to wear, so she’d look like someone who a Malfoy would actually date. As well as her clear distaste for stealing someone else’s appearance. I think that it absolutely seemed in character for her not to love it, but again this is an assignment she’d been given and she isn’t going to back down just because there are some details she doesn’t love.

Ooh I like her allies name! I’m a fan of Hailey. It’s very feminine and fits in well with the kind of persona their trying to give off for her. And I love that you have ‘Hailey’s’ background so well planned out!

OH! OH! Malfoy doesn’t even know it’s Hermione :O! I hadn’t realized that! What a fun twist, you sneaky author.


And now I’m so excited to find out what’s going on at this evenings meeting!

I really like that you didn’t take away Draco’s arrogance. I am all for believing that Draco straightened up after the war, when he finally had the freedom to make his own decisions without his life and his family live’s hanging over his head, but I don’t like when he isn’t still ‘Draco.’ So I really love that you aren’t changing his personality in to an unrealistic sweet sort of attitude. He’s working on the right side of the law now, but he was still born and raised a Malfoy and has it built into his brain that he’s better than anyone else. Even if that eventually fades, it would never go away completely, and I think you’re doing an awesome job showing that.

This was another exciting chapter, m’dear!

Author's Response: Hey Jami,

I'm so very sorry that it has taken me WAY too long to respond to this review. No cookies for me... :(

Anyway, I could never see Hermione dressing the way that Hailey does. I am the same way and I know I would be so uncomfortable when if I had the body to pull it off. But you are right on the money with that line "this is an assignment she’d been given and she isn’t going to back down just because there are some details she doesn’t love." Hermione is never one to back away from a challenge.

LOL! You crack me up. Nope Draco doesn't know who she is. I was going to tell him but he is just too impatient and full of himself, I just couldn't bring myself to tell him yet.

Nope, in this story I want to Malfoy pride to show through because you are right. It may fade in time but it will never go away complete because it is who he is and how he lived in his formative years. Plus, it helps that he must maintain this persona to continue to work undercover.

Thank you for another awesome review!!

Meg



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