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Review:adluvshp says:
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Ah this story is quite lovely! I am enjoying your characters a lot. I like your writing style, and the way you incorporate some small details like Remus singing which add to the story. I'd like to know more about Millie's past too, its quite intriguing to know more about her parents being killed and what happened etc.

The only little criticism (if you can call it that) I have is that you shouldn't leave out Pettigrew so much. Remember, he was one of the marauders and he was their best friend, and he didn't "switch sides" until after Hogwarts, so during the Hogwarts years, he should be as involved in everything as the other three. Your story would be less realistic and less believable if you continue to leave him out in the upcoming chapters and that might turn away some readers.

But apart from that, good work! I am quite liking this and I can see this heading in a good direction.

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means so much to me that you appreciate my writing style! And more about Millie's family background is revealed, although quite a bit later on in the story.

I know I've probably lost readers because of this. I hate myself for doing it, but it's just SO DIFFICULT for me to include him. I know he was their friend and everything. I think I give him like one line at some point, and that's it (it is one of my favourite lines, though). I hope it isn't too damning!


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