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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Hey there, its Gabbie with your requested review and man do I honestly love this story. I think what you've got here is something so mysterious and funny and unique that it just gets better the more I read it. I think Charlie is the most interesting OC that I've been reading for a while, aside from some others and I love being in her head. Some of her thoughts are actually something that I would say or think myself and her awkwardness is very realistic. I wish she'd have a bit more confidence in herself but other than that, I think she's going to be great as the story progresses.
But anyway, she finally found out the truth about Tori being missing and she had every right to be spooked. I mean, everyone was acting really weird about it! I'm not sure who I'm more wary of, Rebecca, Twin One and Two or Aine! D':
And what is this with James? I feel like he's a character wrapped up in another character and I can't wait to undress him--I mean, figure out the layers and complexities of his mind.
*Ahem*
I really hope that, for some reason, Charlie becomes friends with Fred the Second, that's a friendship that would make me laugh. I really like his character and I sort of wanted to know how that Care of Magical Creatures class went.
One little break there would have actually been nice to set up your next scene, that's actually the only CC I have. :D
Other than that, what is this with Albus, hm? Mysterious stuff! Why would James warn her off from his own brother? And why were the twins so adamant that Charlie stay away from James? And Merlin, why are they so eerie? That last scene spooked me out a little! :D
So, anyway, great chapter! Re-request and I shall re-request on your thread! (I think I have already though. HEHEHE.)
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Thank you again for the lovely review-it always makes me so happy when I check my stories and see that I have a new review or two!

I'm so glad you love the story, and Charlie. She is definitely very awkward, but I think she gains more, erm, social skills as the story goes on! Everyone is certainly acting weird about Tori's disappearance and the twins are definitely two girls to be wary about.

Hehehehehe. Your comment about James made me chucke (in an entirely non creepy, manic or evil way, of course) and I agree with all your comments about him.

FRED! That is all I have to say. And more about the brothers shall be revealed...

Courtney:)


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