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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi!! Congratulations on another awesome chapter!!

I love the sharp contrast between Edia and Lisa; how Lisa is always so put-together and perfect compared to Edie's best-attempts-gone-bad. It almost makes me hate Lisa, because of her perfection. But I can't hate her!! She's too nice!!

Ugh. Very realistic characters you've got here. Fantabulousness!

The group of rich people that came in were stupid and gross. I loved how you made the time pass by with the amount of drinks they were having. Instead of saying "Time passed," you illustrated the passage of time with countless numbers of alcoholic beverages. Nice!!

Victor Krum peeing on the wall?! LOLOLOLOLROFL!!! Too funny!! That's the kind of gag that really gives this story its edge: you're not afraid to have your characters do some really unorthodox things!

Of course, there is some speculation as to whether or not he actually IS Victor Krum. I think not!! But the question remains: Why was Oliver pretending to be Vicky when he already has his own Quidditch fame? Was he just drunk out of his mind, or was there some other reason?

I am glad he apologized for all the damage he did, although he insisted on getting into so much trouble before he calmed down.

As for Rose... HATE. I just really don't even like her and her laziness. She has a paid position and Edie doesn't, for crying out loud! She should be more responsible or grateful that she, at least, has a chance to show the bosses her good work!! I think you've done a very good job of making me hate her. :)

I feel like Edie agreeing to write the article was a sort of Faustian deal with a pretty Mephistopheles. It's just a sticky situation; something that she's been waiting her whole career for, and here's a girl offering it to her. However, since Rose is involved, there's bound to be trouble!!

Great chapter!

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Why hello!

I'm glad you like Lisa! I know I've said this countless times, but she's based very closely off of one of my own friends (beautiful, kind, fiance she's crazy about, travelling, dream job, etc.) So while some readers find her a little unrealistic, she seems completely palpable to me because she's based off of someone I know!

I'm glad you caught that Krum was actually Oliver! A lot of readers--at least the ones who have commented--didn't seem to do that. In my mind, Wood was just outrageously drunk and acting like a complete fool. I imagine he thought his Krum impersonation was particularly hilarious, and I picked him for Wood to impersonate because I feel like he's more popular than other players as a double-threat. Meaning he was a Quidditch hero AND a Tri-Wizard competitor. :D

Glad to know that Rose frustrates you so! hehe. I feel the very same. And you're spot-on with the article situation.

Thanks so much for the review! ♥


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