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Review:missclaire17 says:
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WHY!
OF COURSE THIS WOULD HAPPEN!
WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY!
GOSH!!! Parkinson's Disease...
I wonder if the St. Mungo's Healers can make a cure for it even if wizarding folks don't usually get it because they're magical.

Gosh, I was so scared it was cancer or something like that, though I suppose that this is the same thing in a way: a horrible disease.

At least James KNOWS now. the earlier part about how he never had to really fight for anything was crazy, how nervous he was.
I think it says a lot about how nerve-wracking that must have been that he was so nervous to go talk to Carlotta after all of those other nerve-wracking experiences like must-win Quidditch games, getting his career back on track, and fixing things with his family.

Honestly, Carlotta needs to stop being like that :P it makes me sad to see that she really does think that she doesnt deserve something good and that she thinks she'll only be holding James back. It'd be nice to read about the moment when Lily told Carlotta that James is going crazy because she left him.

I hope magic can fix this Parkinson's Disease.
Honestly, I really do because those two deserve a happy ending

Author's Response: Poor old Carlotta's in a rotten situation! She doesn't like the thought of putting ANYONE in a less-than-ideal situation, and so for it to be someone like James, who has so much going for him ... well, she can't bring herself to let him commit! Clearly he needs to try to change her mind on that point. :) As for whether magic can provide a cure ... well, the next chapter might go some way to producing an answer to that question, but it will certainly become a running theme throughout the rest of James and Carlotta's story.

I'm liking your interest in the Lily/Carlotta discussion! I actually have a list of potential one-shot ideas which I may get round to writing someday if I have the time/inspiration. That moment is in the list, so you may get lucky. And on that note if there's anything else that happens 'off-screen' that you think you'd like to read then just mention it; I can't promise to write it but if people are genuinely interested in this side-project then there's more chance of me producing something. :) Thanks for reviewing!


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