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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Slytherin review tag!

Yet another amazing story, I see. The emotions in this one-shot were so raw and so real-you really made Narcissa seem like such a believable character in this, that I really felt her sorrow when Lucius died...and I think you wrote his death absolutely perfectly.

I'm quite happy you included Dean in this story, because it's always interesting to find out what the canon characters get up to when they leave school...and I really enjoyed you take on him.

I think you ended this one-shot perfectly, and I have absolutely nothing bad to say. Keep writing!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks s much for reading and reviewing!

I am glad you liked this story of mine too - it is closest to my heart! I am pleased you found the emotions written well, and found Narcissa believable. I was a little worried about how the death came off, but I am glad you liked it.

The idea of including Dean came to me on a whim so its great you enjoyed his portrayal!

Thank you so much for your lovely comments. Your reviews have made me so happy!


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