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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Ugh, I love your writing so much! Every time I begin a new story of yours, I think "This can't possibly be as good as the last one" but every time I am proven wrong-your writing just gets better and better.

Your Lucius and Narcissa stories, especially this one, have honestly made me fall in love with that pairing. Your characterization of both Narcissa and Lucius, but especially Narcissa in this was absolutely spot on, and you brought up some very interesting ideas and plotlines that really hooked me in, and made sure I couldn't tear my eyes away from the page-well, screen.

I loved the idea of Blacks being married off when they came of age, because it definitely seems like something that would happen within that family, and I'm glad that Narcissa was happy with her arrangement-have you ever considered writing a novella or novel about Narcissa and Lucius? Becuase you seem to have so many great ideas!

I really loved the format of this piece and every moment was chosen very well, in my opinion. The whole thing flowed smoothly and Just wow. I honestly don't have an constructive criticism for this piece because it was just so perfect! Sorry if I'm being waffly and random and not making any sense, but I am so jealous of your writing right now!

Anyway, until next time...

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

*blush* You flatter me so much, I am not half as good as some amazing authors out there.

I love Lucius/Narcissa pairing so I am glad you developed a liking to it too through my stories. I am pleased that you liked the characterisations of Lucius and Narcissa in this story, and that you liked the plotlines.

The idea of Blacks being married when coming off age was something that struck me as right too, it could be a pureblood thing xD Haha thanks for the compliment, I am awful at writing novel/novellas though - I tend to lose my muse after a while =(

Its great that you liked the format of the piece and the moments. You made perfect sense really and I am so flattered right now. Thank you for your amazing review, it has made my day!!

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