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Review:Courtney Dark says:

Okay, weirdo moment over. I apologize profusely but, if you couldn't tell, I just love Louis so much and we don't see many stories in which he is the central character...or even stories which he is in at all. So by having this story from his point of view, you are already doing something original and unique, which I love. Also, there are already quite a few Albus/OC pregnancy stories out there...though of course, none (that I've seen) which are told from the father's point of view.

So many pregnancy stories are cliche and over done-they start with a party, a large bottle of Firewhiskey and two 'enemies' having a one night stand. I love the fact that your take on things is completely different-that Louis and Freya are already in a relationship and clearly love each other very much. I love how much emotion you were able to put into this first chapter. I felt so bad for Louis, and I just wanted to run up and give him a big hug!

I am now super interested to find out where this story is going to go-will Louis and Freya's relationship be tested? What more will we find out about their characters? I would also like to know more about Bill and Fleur as parents, as I haven't read an awful lot about them in next generation.

Great first chapter.

Author's Response: Aww thank you :D I love you for reading and reviewing this chapter.
You can continue with weirdo moments, I really like them hehe.
That's ok, I'm beginning to love Louis now he really needs to be featured in more stories.
I really wanted this story to be a lot different to the pregnancy stories I have read so I wanted to change things up, which is why I wanted this to be from the fathers POV, there's a lot more coming up that's a lot different then the other stories I've read.
Louis would appreciate the hug :D
There will be more Bill and Fleur in this story don't you worry!
Thank you so very much hun! :D

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