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Review:Jchrissy says:
Oh god. This was a real roller coaster, you know. You're playing with all my feels. And those things are fragile enough as it is :(!

I'm starting at the beginning, even though all I really want to to do is gush about the end.

The nerves of Scorpius and Rose... the fear and anxiety they have... it was incredibly realistic and well done. I think Scorpius's suggestion to just leave if she wants to, go away and start their own life was perfect. Of course he would suggest that, because he loves her and doesn't want to see anything bad to happen to her. He couldn't live his life without her. But finding Nate is the only real way to clear her name.

I love that you're using areas you're so familiar with, it makes it all feel very realistic with the way you explained what connections they could take. And could you imagine being Scorpius and being on a plane for the first time? He's used to being able to travel instantly, and now he's in this huge metal tube, it's taking hours and he's supposed to just relax! Haha poor guy.

NOW onto the funeral. I felt so angry... more at Nate than anyone. But also at Neville and Hannah for being so blind. I mean, obviously their in an unworldly amount of pain, but they have to be able to see that things don't add up! Nate is a creep. I'm angry at him for putting his parents through this, for putting all the family through this, and ASHLEY I really need to know what happens so I want you to finish this. Please. With sugar on top?

I want to see everyone's faces... or read their faces I guess, when we learn Nate is alive.

Getting into a fight at a memorial service isn't right... but it was so perfect in this. They're all hurting and they've all lost so much.. gah.

This was an awesome chapter, probably my favorite so far. All the emotions were just so raw and close to the surface.

Next chapter, yeah? ;)

Author's Response: Jami!

I think that I had to go with areas I was familiar with because I don't really want to do the research into other places, I am entirely too lazy :P I think exploring these areas is going to be really fun.

As for the funeral scene, the whole recap Harry does was basically for my own benefit because I started to get lost in all the details. I really need to sit down and just figure out what I'm doing with all of this.

As you know I did start writing on this a little but I think it's going to be a long hard journey to ever get another chapter out. I will try as hard as I can though!

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