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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hi Gabbie!
So this story is definitely starting to get darker and more mysterious! The murders are starting to play a larger role, too, which is really interesting, especially because they're going to have to keep a close eye on Scorpy to make sure he's ok! I would be terrified if I were him!
I loved he beginning of this chapter, and think it's awesome that we get to see another side of Roxanne through this story! She's a hilarious character, and I love her interactions with Peeves and the Misfits! I could definitely see her having a talent for trouble (she is related to George, after all!) and I love that she was willing to get in trouble with Zabini to help her cousin! She definitely has guts!
I'm really interested to see what's going on with the Wolfsbane, too! What with that horrible smell, Zabini won't be able to hide it for long! And the scratching in the walls... Hm. Something fishy is definitely going on!
I can't wait for the next chapter when we get to see Ben!!! Yay! And of course, I'm really, really excited for Percy and Audrey, too! I'm working on ASOS, and I'll let you know when to expect that! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Hey there, thanks for being the first person to stop by with a review. Its very nice to see you coming back for this story, it makes me all happy and such!
I think I could honestly classify this as a dark comedy, there's so much happening with the children and so many bad things. I'd be a liar if I said I didn't do it on purpose. Hahaha.
I think the entire thing has to to do with the murders, the kids think Zabini has something to do with them, don't they? Hahaha. But Scorpy had better keep his eyes open because not everything is as it seems in this story. :D
I actually like the beginning of this chapter better than the later half, but that's mostly because Roxanne is hilarious. She's crafty and brilliant and its great writing her with the Misfits and Peeves! :D She's a horrible influence.
You will actually be getting answers for the Wolfsbane in the next few chapters, this entire thing with Zabini is nearing an end.
Next chapter you finally meet Ben! :D I'm going to update for Audrey later today and when you read it, I hope you enjoy it! :D
Can't wait for ASOS and Holding On too, make sure to let me know when they're up!
Thanks again!
Much love,

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