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Review:AlexFan says:
Wearing a skirt in September would be freezing! In any country you'd be cold but I hear that the weather in the UK is particularly bad so it'd be even worse there! At least Thalia can wear tights with her skirt, she won't be as cold.

If I were Thalia's friends, I wouldn't bother going to try on robes, I'd just follow Thalia and Lily around and spy on them. It would probably be a lot more fun in my opinion.

Sheesh, Thalia seems awfully angry for someone who supposedly hates Sirius and thinks he has a giant ego. She even said it herself, she doesn't like him and she doesn't care that he was ignoring her and they'd argued in previous years. Why the sudden caring about Sirius?

Oh my gosh, I completely forgot about Mary getting attacked in fifth year! You just reminded me that that happened, well God damn, I feel bad for Mary! Bad things happen to good people sometimes as they say!

Anyway, good chapter, I didn't notice any big grammar/punctuation mistakes!
~Grace

Author's Response: Hi again!

Yes it would be freezing, I live in the warmest (apparently) part of it, and it's horrible, as going out in a skirt if sending a death wish to yourself!

I guess they did sort of follow her around in the end, but of course they couldn't say it otherwise, they would be no point of spying!

I completely forgot about Mary being attacked as well, until I was on her wiki page and saw it, so I knew I had to include it in the story, as I want it to be as canon as possible!

Thanks for the review!

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