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Review:Soraa says:
This was honestly great, I love the way that the only way they can be close to each other is by fighting. I have a feeling that Carla is going to take this a lot better than Matt, I mean I know that Matt was being protective of her but when they are left alone Matt is going to feel really hurt by the fact that he really doesn't know her very well.

I also love the way in which they both know that they have been in this position before but neither of them realise what it is leading too, the only way they are going to feel something for one another again is for something dangerous to happen. The best thing about this is that Scorp doesn't hurt her, she is hurting herself, which DEFINATELY reflects their relationshiphow she is the destructive one, I also love how Scorp seems so together, he has proberbly managed to mask his feelinging which he could never do in fighting temptation, I still think he is going to be broken behind the scenes but he will hold up a strong cover. Also I'm really curious what you meant by 'his current situation' care to share?

Finally sorry for the long review again, and I really love this, it made me think of miss congenality the film where they are fighting :P Thanks for the update,
Sora.

Author's Response: First of all I love the long review! Absolutly 100% love it. Second I must say Soraa out of the reviews that people have left me for Fighting Temptation and for this one you are one of the few who has ever come close to figuring out what is going to happen, you've never been a 100% right (which is good cuz I like to keep you on your toes), but you have been pretty darn close before. lol.
Matt isn't going to be happy at all, part of the reason why I made Carla his girlfriend was because I really wanted to stress that he and Rose's relationship is very close, and he in a way is the only person who has ever really gotten to know who Rose is now because she keeps people distant, however he knows nothing about her past, and it will nagg at him.
As for Scorpius and Rose when it comes to feeling for one another that is complicated, to say the least. I love that you picked up on the fact that Scorpius didn't hit Rose back, I originally had planned out a more brutal fight scene in my head where Scorpius did hit Rose back, but as I was righting it I began to think that if he has changed so much he wouldn't be able to hurt her, he doesn't underestimate her but I just couldn't make him hit her, it would have been a dishonor o his character. Rose is a little more on the war rampage right now because deep down she knows that nothing good can come from this, and she is a little distructive at the moment, she has spent a lot of years holding people at arms length.
As for poor Scorpius I would love to share whats going on with him... in a later chapter update. lol. I will tell you that you are right on him masking his feelings.
Also last love the miss congenality comment that was so what I was thinking of when I was writing it. Except i wasn't trying to make it as much of a fight, I was trying to put a little bit of passion into it to show that their connection is still there so I hope I succeded. Thank you so much for the Review, Chapter 3 in two weeks.


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