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Review:marauder5 says:
Oh, so it was Greengrass! Sorry, I probably just missed that part earlier. Interesting... is this story going to be canon? i.e., is she going to end up with Malfoy? I'm exited to see! I know she'll fall in love with a mudblood, but perhaps it won't work out between them (they do have the odds against them, right?)

I find myself totally sucked into this story. I love the characters that you've come up with - the Nott brothers, Daphne... I especially enjoyed this description of her: "Daphne is an ice princess. Iím surprised the plants in the greenhouses donít curl up in cold defeat when she enters their sanctuary, and thatís including the naturally aggressive Venomous Tentacula." Brilliant :)

I also liked the idea of this group that they're forming, the kids of Death Eaters. It seems a bit like the opposite of DA.. except they probably won't learn dark magic there. Or will they?

Tor's friendship with the guys is wonderful. I love reading about their interactions. You're a talented writer. Normally, I like stories with lots of descriptions of environment and the way everything looks etc., but your story really doesn't need it. It's perfect the way it is, and it just keeps getting better. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Hello again! Yeah, I picked Astoria because I thought she would be an interesting story to tell, but I wanted to give her an identity and voice beyond Malfoy which is the main reason I gave her a nickname. I'm planning to stick with the canon as much as possible, however I like the idea of Malfoy still being a jerk at this point in time, so any future he and Tor may have together is very far away!

I put Tor as Yaxley's daughter because he has some good lines in the books which I'd like to tie in, but yeah the name change was a bit confusing! Hopefully the reason Tor and Daphne go by their mother's name makes sense in the later chapters, I was playing around with the canon a bit there and wasn't sure if it made sense even to me. So no worries for you being confused :)

Thank you so much for reviewing! Your thoughtful and kind words are amazing and also helpful for the future of this story!!! :)

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