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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Hey there! I saw you were new to the Gryffindor Common Room and decided to come have a look at your story :)

Wow, this was intense! It was such a short chapter but I could already feel all the emotion and hatred James was feeling. I can't imagine what he's going through and I'm really anxious to read the next chapter.

I liked how you characterized James in this. He seemed very protective and loyal and I can see why he's going after Albus after what he did to Lily. and speaking of that, I'm really interested to find out what really happened!

Nice job on this and I hope you continue with it and update it soon! :)

-Amanda

Author's Response: That is so kind of you to come review my story! I think in this story, I wanted to portray James and Albus really as...complete opposites. I can't wait to build up and show you WHY it's like that!

I am so humbled you came to review, it means a lot coming from a fellow Gryffie! Thanks!

-Scott


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