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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hello itís patronus_charm from the Mumford and Sons challenge! I was really intrigued to see what you did with this quote, as it was one of my favourite ones as you can do so much with it!

I thought it was great that you made Harry afraid of entering the house, as you would imagine that he would be pretty fearless considering everything heís faced, and yet his scared of entering his own home. I thought this was rather comical.

James made me laugh so much, and it was nice to see that he wasnít the arrogant person, heís usually portrayed to be. I get so bored of this portrayal of him, as I donít picture him as big headed, so I much preferred how you wrote him.

The fact that he was heartbroken over his subscription being cancelled was great, as you donít tend to react like that, and for a womenís magazine as well. I felt for Harry then, as it seemed like a rather strange situation to deal with, and you could sense he almost wished that he was heartbroken, as that would have been normal to deal with.

I really liked all of the sibling interactions, but I think the best one was Albusís reaction to finding out Father Christmas didnít really exist, poor him, when I found that out, it felt as if my world had come crashing down. I also really liked how your portrayed Harry and Ginny as parents, and I found it very accurate how Harry was the more lenient parent, whereas Ginny was the rule enforcer.

I thought this was a good start to the story, and Iíll PM you the results of the challenge (though that wonít be for a while ;) ).

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: Heya! Your challenge was so much fun to write and I'm so glad that I took part in it. I do love a bit of Mumford and Sons, my favourite son is I gave you all.

Thank you I'm glad that you liked that, I wanted to have him have a fear of his crazy family.

Oh James, yes James is a very silly and crazy person in this story, I didn't want to portray him as big headed, I wanted him to be a bit stupid.

Poor Harry will have to deal with a lot more from his children in the future so the magazine will be something he wishes he could go back to :D

Ah yes Albus, not something that a teenager should be upset over but funny none the less. Aww bless you! *hugs*

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this story, thank you so much for reading and reviewing it, I can't wait to hear the results of the challenge :D


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