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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Meg,
I'm so happy to see that you have continued this story and that you have planned it out. Yeah!

This chapter is absolutely beautiful. She finally knows what she wants and he wants the same. Your scene was amazingly romantic. I love how she has let loose and initiated a bit of fun with the grapes.

I love it that he asks if she is SURE.

I love how you describe the scene with her straddling him and how she unbuttoned his shirt. You have wow'd me and have scored high points in the romance category. :)

It was beautiful in every way. I appreciate how you wrote that he waited for her and had planned this encounter. He is TRYING... you know? It is truly wonderful to read.

Your description of the beach was perfect, especially "the white soft sand covered the sound of her footsteps." Wow... written like a pro. Fantastic! It might not seem like an important detail, but its these tiny details that make it real. You inspire me. I need to do a better job of this in my own writing.

"His eyes asking permission...?" Wow. *melts*

You have given Dramione fans a scene that will linger with us for days... :)

So romantic! Excellent, Meg...
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Dark,

I think my heart just grew ten sizes because it is so full of happiness from your review. I'm a big pile of goo at the moment.

I have never really written a romantic scene before and I was almost embarrassed to post because it can be hard to write. It's kinda putting yourself out there a little more that usual, you know??

Yes, Draco has decided what he wants and is willing to try and I knew I was ready for Hermione to open up a bit to Draco.

My heart is glowing. Thank you for amazingly kind words and lovely review!

Meg


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