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Review:Jchrissy says:
Okay, switching from review mode between these two stories is not incredibly easy. Haha.

Let me put my light fluffy cap on.
Rose is a diva. A Diva. I love it. She's living in her own little world and no one can tell her what to do there, and Lily's just sort of going with it. I love them being sort of a duo modeling team. It's cute. And I like that Albus, though it isn't his dream job, is being the agent for those two and watching out for Lily. He seems to have a better sense of humor about the whole thing than James :P

I'm happy that you didn't make their crime anything serious. It was enough to make it clear to us that Rose is definitely a free spirit with Lily playing along, but they aren't these two famous girls that get involved with the more illegal sides of things.

Watching the Potter brothers get together to help these two, though James might not have been incredibly thrilled about the whole thing, was adorable. And you can't really blame James for not wanting to waste what I'm guessing was years of law school on getting his sister and cousin off the hook.

And it sees very probable that both sides of this story, the world with Dom you've given us and then this one, will all combine next chapter! Eek!

See, putting my fluffy review cap on wasn't too hard! I have to say, following up the serious nature of Yellow with something as fun as this does feel good.

I'm excited to head over to chapter three soon!



Author's Response: Oh my gosh, Rose is such a diva. I won't spoil it for you, but there comes a time later in the story when even she is challenged in that regard, in terms of how diva she can really be. She is so entertaining in how horrid she is, and yet, there's a good person hiding in there, too :)

I love the potential that comes with the Potter family dynamic. I really wanted that Weasley bond to come through here, but also to show that young adults have their own opinions and will think what they will about one another. I'm glad you like James and Albus and the way they try to look out for their baby sister.

Yes, you're right! Dom and Darcy will re-appear in chapter three, which is up as of today. Chapter four will be up next Sunday!

Thanks for your loveliness! You're awesome to take time out of your busy schedule to come over and check out my updates--speaking of which, I bet you'll love the new Venn/Helena chapter! Anyway, nice to see you once again.

-Amanda


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