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Review:Jchrissy says:
This was absolutely my favorite chapter so far. I really liked our characters meeting. How far apart are they age wise? I thought that Cedric may recognize her from Hogwarts, but maybe things were done differently in this time. Maybe being in different houses meant you only saw those house members?

I loved the bit of dry humor we got with Cedric in this. "Figured that out for myself." Even though it was only said in his head, it made him even more realistic. And his sudden worry about this wand! That was excellent. It reminds us that, even though he is a soldier, he's still a wizard and magic is part of him.

The discussions about the potions totally had my mind spinning. Obviously I know where else this was headed, so I'm already wondering if they do find an antidote, will they be allowed to give it to the muggles that have been in contact with this the antidote? Okay, sorry, getting ahead of myself here. haha.

I got chills when Cho passed the chained doors. I love how you're including enough things to remind us that this isn't a walk in the park. This isn't a girl playing nurse, it's war time in real life and it's terrible.

The different dynamics you're incorporating: muggles working with wizards/witches, all the grittiness of war time, two young people who've ended up in a place that they never thought they'd be a few years before -- it keeps things so dimensional and makes me anxious to see what's going to happen every chapter!

Author's Response: Hi Jami!

Cedric and Cho are roughly the same age; I think Cho is maybe a year younger than Cedric, like in canon. I would imagine that he would have seen Cho around at Hogwarts but may not have remembered her or really gotten to know her, since they would have had only a few classes together.

It's great that you like Cedric. I figured that a wizard would feel really lost without his wand; they use magic for so many basic things, and I bet Cedric found a use for some of those defensive spells while out on the battlefield. It's probably scary for him to be without it.

I'll hold on the Potions discussion for now. Stay tuned--it'll be more important later.

I'm happy you like the grittiness and the different layers that you see coming forth in the plot. There'll be another chapter up next week, so I'll see you again next Saturday :)

Thanks for your awesome review!


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