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Review:Locomotor_Kingsley says:
I'm a bit confused as to why Mrs. Weasley is dictating whether or not Ron and the others can go on this trip, considering they are presumably adults. However, it did add a bit of humor to the story.

I assume that this Ms. Hope girl is going to turn out to be Kingsley's daughter. It's a bit surprising such a young girl would be Minister (Mistress?) of Magic, but this is an interesting situation.

I noticed several small typos or grammatical errors (such as missing commas) in this chapter. I think things must always slip through, but giving your work an extra read-through before posting it, like you would do for an assignment for school could probably help eliminate those errors.

Author's Response: Thanks again for another review, totally made my day. Especially since it's so long. I do realise there are a lot of errors and I do plan to edit the whole thing once the story is written.

Now here's a bit of a spoiler Ms. Hope is not Kingsley's daughter. But that is all I will say on the matter ;)

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