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Review:soapman333 says:
Awesome, I love me some one-shots (that wasn't supposed to sound lame, but it did. Sorry).

Oh wow, I like this approach to little Tommy. He's "morph[ed]" into what people call him. I got chills reading the way he nonchalantly mentioned those incidents with his fellow orphans. Gah, but I still felt sympathy, even when I know his future.

Way to make me want to adopt an evil wizard :P.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this,
soapman333

Author's Response: Hi!

Yes I love one-shots to, as it means you explore something you would have never written about before!

I'm glad that you liked this approach to Tom, as I was trying to show that though he was evil at such a young age, he was still a child, and one that deserve some sympathy.

I have to say I did feel sorry for him when writing this, even though I know what he did in the future!

Lol! Perhaps if you adopted him, you could have made him a nicer person, and he wouldn't have turned out to be an evil wizard!

Thanks for the review, it made me laugh! And I'm really glad that you enjoyed this read!


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