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Review:nick9n says:
OH MY GOD!!! I THOUGHT YOU HAD A BETA BUT I HAVE SEEN SO MANY SPELLING AND GRAMMAR MISTAKES IN THIS THAT I THINK I MIGHT START SLITTING MY WRISTS (wrists is the plural of wrist not wrist) AGAIN!!! Joking but seriously get a better beta. Good story though, a bit choppy at times but still better than anything I could write.

Author's Response: Yeah my grammar sucks big time. I did have a beta for a while. I'm not entierly sure that the grammar gets much better, I do try to catch it more now, because this chapter was written nearly three years ago so... As for the choppy that does improve, like I said three years ago, my writting (in my personal opnion) has improved sense then and I continue to look out for a choppy structure. I'm glad that you like the story, but I am sorry that the grammar isn't better. But thank you for the review.

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