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Review:GrangerDanger76 says:
Hey! My name is Camille from the forums! I saw your post in the RC Common room and thought I'd check your story out!

So first off, your writing is just lovely, it's so professional and mature that I would honestly pick this up and read it if it was a published book. I love the way you've developed Harry's character, and I guess you're a Harry/Hermione shipper huh? :) I quite liked the interaction between Harry and Dumbledore but also between him and the Dursley's because while it is somewhat cannon, you're putting your own spin on it which is unique and refreshing. I really really enjoyed reading this chapter, and will definitely come back once the others were validated. Your writing is so very good and I hope your proud of your first chapter.

Overall, I didn't see any typos, but then again, I am no beta. :) But good work there, you probably actually proof read!

But really, great job on this chapter, I can't wait to see you around the forums, and read more of your story!


Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the first chapter. I've written loads more, but validation takes longer than I'd hope sometimes. If you are interested, I can email you the other chapters I have written so you can read it all now.

I actually don't proofread at all. I right all of my chapters really late at night while I'm just trying to find something to do (clinically diagnosed insomnia does wonders for my writing), then I just save them and post them after maybe one read through. I know that's not the best tactic, but I do edit as I write. I cannot for the life of me leave a typo sitting with the logic that "spell check will catch it later". OCD ftw.

Thanks for reading and I can't wait for you to see the rest of the chapters!

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